Honestly Kid

by Daniel Damkoehler

 

premature fiction

Local Boy Murdered

The fol­low­ing selec­tions appeared in The Brenlee News, first week of September, 1986. The arti­cle ran next to a three col­umn photo of an old clap­board house cap­tioned “Sneed home. Mr. Sneed found the boy’s body in his orchard yes­ter­day morning.”

Brenlee, California — The body of a 12 year old boy was found in a peach orchard on the north­east edge of town yes­ter­day morn­ing. Mr. Pickem Sneed, a local farmer and owner of the orchard, dis­cov­ered the boy’s body while tend­ing to his orchard. Mr. Sneed imme­di­ately called the police and Officer Richard Hoban arrived on the scene, alert­ing county author­i­ties to the mat­ter. The sheriff’s depart­ment homi­cide squad have taken over the case.

In a brief writ­ten state­ment, the sheriff’s depart­ment iden­ti­fied the boy as Tomas Coates, who moved to Brenlee three years ago to live with his mother, Maria Batista. The boy’s father, Albert “Bert” Coates, lives in Livermore, California, but for­merly attended school in Brenlee where he met the boy’s mother.

The sheriff’s state­ment revealed no details of the crime, in the inter­ests of releas­ing only the most accu­rate infor­ma­tion and to avoid tip­ping off the killer as they con­tinue their inves­ti­ga­tion. It is thought that the killer is not local to the Brenlee area, though par­ents of chil­dren under the age of 16 are advised to keep their chil­dren close by and to avoid let­ting them play out­side past dusk.

Local reac­tion to rumors and news of the crime has been var­ied. At the Ebbert’s Chevron Station, cor­ner of Main and Evans, we inter­viewed Barbara Stubbs, who was tak­ing her two young chil­dren to stay with her mother in Stockton. “I never thought I’d have to take my kids away from here. But I ain’t gonna risk. Working my hours at the canary, I just can’t keep an eye on them in the after­noons.” She intends to bring them back to Brenlee, though she says when depends on how soon the sher­iff appre­hends the killer and how soon the can­nary lays off its sea­sonal employees.

Tomas Coates attended 7th grade at Brenlee Elementary where he did well in sci­ence and art classes. He most enjoyed play­ing soc­cer and played all year, not just dur­ing the local recre­ation sea­son. Margie Phelps, his soc­cer coach, said “Tommy loved soc­cer. He wasn’t the best, but he never quit and I know we won games because of him, even if he didn’t score that many points.” Though his teach­ers described him as quiet and reserved, Tommy was a boy and could get into trou­ble like most boys. “I nearly kicked him off the team because he kept kick­ing that soc­cer ball while the other kids took bat­ting prac­tice,” said Principle James, also his Little League coach. “But he was the best sec­ond base­man we had and when it came to the games he never quit. He was per­sis­tent no mat­ter what he did, bad or good.”

Parents of Tommy’s friends declined to let their chil­dren be inter­viewed for this arti­cle. Reverend Loof spoke briefly on behalf of chil­dren and par­ents, “Today is a lit­tle soon. It’s still sink­ing in. Maybe next week after we have all grieved at the memo­r­ial service.”

Contrary to all expec­ta­tions, The Brenlee News never printed a fol­low up arti­cle about the mur­der. Not the next week, month or year. All record of the boy’s death was left to the larger papers and other media cov­er­ing the crime. Perhaps this was because the town had had enough of reporters or per­haps, as was rumored, that after 32 years in Brenlee, Phillip Bergoyan had had enough of report­ing on this small California town, its peo­ple, its tragedies, and all the dark shame it hid under the scorch­ing cen­tral val­ley sun. Whatever his rea­sons, Bergoyan stopped writ­ing all but the most pedes­trian of sto­ries and sold the paper six months later. The for­mer editor-in-chief was said to have moved back to Fresno, where he drank, smoked, and told sto­ries with the old Armenian men who were his boy­hood friends.