Honestly Kid

by Daniel Damkoehler

 

premature fiction

Expert Work

Plaster radios Winnie at the sta­tion. He knows there is a code for this. He knows the code, some­where in his mind he knows the code.

One-seven are you there?” She asks. “Dennis?”

Yeah, we have uh… uh… we have an appar­ent Nine-fourteen ‘S’ out at the Currie house.”

S”.

It’s not Andy.”

Static hisses, breaks, and hisses again. Winnie hasn’t any words to send.

Winnie?”

I’m here.”

It looks like Mose.”

More hiss­ing and then Winnie speaks con­fi­dently, sound­ing like a voice from a TV cop show, “Unit one-seven, main­tain your posi­tion. Emergency ser­vices are on the way. Over.”

One-seven…uh…staying put. Over.”

Dennis has heard that peo­ple will often throw up when they see the results of a shoot­ing at such close range. He hasn’t yet. Instead, he won­ders at how expertly Mose chose the stick to push back the trig­ger and how he knew just the right posi­tion to bal­ance the weapon – butt against the side of his boot, foot pulled up close to his body in order to push the bar­rel against his nose and eye socket. The man knew exactly how to use a shot­gun to com­mit sui­cide. Most peo­ple don’t. In his short tenure as a police offi­cer, Dennis has been called to four sep­a­rate failed attempts (nine-fourteen ‘A‘s), all of them clumsy and most of them caus­ing more dam­age to the home than the person.

On Mose’s lap is the let­ter he wrote to his fam­ily ear­lier that morn­ing. Dennis Plaster’s head throbs as he bends over to pick it up. It’s then that he smells the man. Mose’s liv­ing smell – cof­fee, laun­dry deter­gent, the fire­house, body odor – fad­ing into the smell of his blood and bod­ily flu­ids. Now, Dennis is sick. He heaves up his own cof­fee and break­fast at the base of another tree. He turns back to Mose’s body and looks at the man’s ruined face. “You fucker,” he whis­pers and walks back toward the house to greet the Emergency Service vehicles.

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